The feedback inspired McLeod, and he decided to start an exercise in constraint: Write a script with few actors and locations. After a meeting where he bounced ideas off one of the movie’s now-producers, Mark Williams of Zero Gravity Management, the action-thriller, Copshop, was born with this philosophy. It takes place mostly in a small-town police station and features the battle between three key characters — a professional hitman, a smart rookie female cop and a double-crossing con man.
Since the movie started filming in the fall of 2020 in Georgia and New Mexico, McLeod has little responsibility until the film comes out. “I’m a fanboy at this stage,” explains McLeod. “If the pandemic wasn’t happening, I’d want to go to the set. But I wouldn’t be there to tell anyone what to do — and they wouldn’t listen to me.” Once the script left his hands, he had little power. However, he does receive updates from producers and can excitedly give the nod when actors, including Gerard Butler and Frank Grillo, sign on to the project.
Some of what McLeod will see on the screen may even surprise him. Carnahan has done his own rewrites and polishes on the script to add his own voice and quirks to it, and hasn’t consulted with McLeod yet about it. This process is very much the norm for Hollywood movies by first-time screenwriters, where the director’s name will do more of the job selling the film to audiences.
“Some writers may be nervous to imagine that they’ve changed something, but I’m not stressed about it. It’s actually a nice buffer between me and the audience.”
For a novelist, McLeod elaborates, an audience directly consumes their work, whereas, for a screenwriter, even if the crew shot all of his descriptions and dialogue word-for-word, the actors, director and film editor would inevitably add more to the final product. “My script is just a blueprint,” he says. “I’ve become less precious about it.”
While he waits for the thrilling day when he can see his script on the theatre screen — or on his living-room TV, depending on our future COVID restrictions — he has no plans to change anything about his day job or run off to Hollywood. McLeod appreciates the balance between his two jobs, and how he’s able to be two different people in each. “As a professional advisor, I’m an extrovert and client-facing, and I need to communicate ideas to people directly,” he explains. “While, as a writer, I’m an introvert and I’m self-conscious. I write stuff in my dark cave, and I feel like I just push it under the door to someone else and I hope that they like it.”